Not bad for a first time translation, but the typesetting definitely needs a second pass. I’m not entirely sure why the text changes font every couple pages, might be best to stick to one of the fonts at the top of this page.
Dad’s a real deadbeat. Good to see he’s getting properly chewed out by pretty much everyone.
Only 12 chapters to go though? Guess we’re moving toward the end now that the siblings’ secrets are getting exposed. Thanks for the translations, and no need to apologize- you’re already cranking this...