Thank you for picking this up, and your efforts to translate this.
As a long time fan of Amano Kozue, I am well aware of her language quirks and outstanding art, so don’t be discouraged and I look forwards to you finishing this series.
Excellently written story that kept to the main plot and didn’t stray into side stories, which is unusual for a Japanese LN.
The manga was also to the plot and beautifully illustrated, with the translators doing an excellent job to reveal the nuances of the language.
Remilia’s manga story should...
I don’t understand: why translate this in English if you yourself are not proficient in that language?
You’ve mixed up past and present tenses, missed punctuation marks and made a racial slur.
Simply terrible.