Please use Grammarly on the script or something, proofreader. The proofreading overall is of high quality, but you missed a bunch of really low-level errors in this chapter.
This series has all that gritty violence and death... and then the antagonists are all cackling supervillains who are evil because they are evil. Bit of a clash.
Much as I appreciate this series getting picked back up, the terrible proofreading is a bit painful. At the very least using a grammar checker would take you very little time.
I appreciate you picking this up, for what it's worth. However, as a group that is asking for Patreon donations, please at the very least run your scripts through a grammar checker even if you're not going to carefully proofread them.