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For your own sanity, every time you read "realistic" in any discussion about fiction on the internet just interpret it as "I like this." Realism is a very low bar to clear.

Every chapter a new twist. They're still interesting but I wish the story could breath and develop a little bit now before adding some more.

"You just have to feel about your sister like I feel about my dead girlfriend." This is some sage advice right here when the other girl is literally living under the same roof as the person she loves. And the author is trying to pass this as some deep wisdom.

I'm sure this is being compared to other works of art when someone says it sucks. Without a frame of reference no one can claim something is good or bad. Anyways, this story would count as NTR, just because some people here are so fascinated with Yami it doesn't change at some point this...

Her perspective shifted as the first time she was doing it out of spite, mainly, for herself. In this chapter she chases because she doesn't want to lose this connection she made. The important thing here is that she perceived some value in herself because of their interaction in the previous...

Yami's motivations changed. Why the guy knows and reacts to that? Don't ask me. Their friendship should be over. Anyone who ever saw something like this happening in a friend group knows this, either Ayami or Hikari would leave that friend group in the next few days. We know this won't happen...

The problem isn't that in my opinion. It's really hard to argue anything these days because people just throw a label at you and disregard a opinion they don't agree with. Right now, my problem with the story is that the tone shift was horridly handled, I don't even know why he decided to go...

Why would he need to damage control anything? This shit is self-published. It's just that this story is managing to be worse than the average Honna Wakou slop without the part that makes those readable.

No tatas. No schlong. Nothing. Just some edgy ass story rehashing multiple story beats from WA2.

This mofo just went to a sick girl to be like "u mad? u sound mad" and acts surprised when his face met her fist.

Asking the real questions. :wtf:

Guess you're referring to fanbox stuff. I'm not caught up to that but in this story it feels like they're keeping it that way without forcing themselves to.

Means nothing. She was praising the teacher until she pulled the rug on him.

Agreed with all this. All this time the idol was more of a device than a character. And it's stretching it too thin, guessing that the idol would be the culprit and trying to get a handshake just to touch her to confirm it. If she can do this level of guessing without needing her power than it...

Finished the raws. What a dumpster fire, Botan makes Ikuno from Nozoki Ana look like a sane person. It was still entertaining although it drags at some parts and I never really cared about the drama between Akira and her sister even after getting their story.

When the MC was getting into Umimi and she seemed to be reciprocating the feelings, Takt started dating Umimi instead. Similar situation to now.

This story is only NTR if you view it through Takt's perspective. Three bitches in heat throwing themselves at the MC who keeps cucking himself by having visions of his gay friend in his mind when that happens. But like you said, the interesting part of reading this is finding out what the...

??????? ??????????? I don't get it. What's even going on?

And Adachi being very needy and possessive isn't an issue? Pipe it down, they both have their issues, Shimamura has never been emotive or good at expressing herself, she might enjoy being mean to Adachi a bit too much, though, but that's part of her distorted way of showing affection.