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Man, it would be great if someone made a story out of these draft notes.

I like the how the nerd goes "I don't acknowledge your relationship" and the prince shoots back "I don't care" rather than being bothered. It was pretty much my reaction when I read it too, 'why would you think you accepting it or not would matter?'

Why would he not get her out of the pool? The best way to protect her secret would have been to act as if she was a real girl, get her out of the water, send her Bakayashiki to look for help, and hope a replacement came along while no one was watching. They could then say she was drowning but...

As always, the MC's knowledge and perspective is all over the place. Like the MC thinks his childhood play was normal, but calls Elizabeth and Fen geniuses for being able to do a fraction of what he could do at their ages. He also thinks his play was normal, but worries all the time about the...

So he had the time to go "to the east" and learn under an ascetic monk in the 5 years in which he left to fight in the war, led a mercenary company, learned to read and write by himself, carpentry, accounting, animal husbandry, cheese making, the particular habits of every magical beast, and a...

How does this guy learn things? He said initially to Maria "people look after themselves in this village", but that was clearly just him, who decided at 2 "Ok, I'm an adult now, i'm going to go live by myself" and took off with one knife into the woods. No one told him to do that. So he grew up...

I wonder if the reason Pryde was so messed up and refused to help anyone with her precognition has to do with how it failed her the first time? From what the MC says, when OG Pryde's powers awakened, she learned about her sister but she couldn't forsee that her father would get into an accident...

I wonder if the reason Pryde was so messed up and refused to help anyone with her precognition has to do with how it failed her the first time? From what the MC says, when OG Pryde's powers awakened, she learned about her sister but she couldn't forsee that her father would get into an accident...

So... do the Prince Consort and the Queen have nothing to say about their daughter jumping into battle? I thought we'd see more of a reaction.

I wonder how the precognition is supposed to work. It's never explained clearly. Can they change what they see, or is it somehow set in stone? And what happens when two people have precognition, do their visions conflict, or do they both see the same? Can they change each others' visions? I'm...

I'm surprised the author hasn't yet drawn a parallel between Style being separated from her mother and Pryde who grew up without her mother. In her case it's less overtly "dramatic", but it's clear she hasn't seen her mother pretty much for six years. I mean, Gilbert even makes the point that...

Seriously, Wistrash is getting praise for not defaming someone? "Oh look, he doesn't go out of his way to slander her! How meritorious!" Plus, the plan is insane. Eustace might be safe just spreading rumors, but him confirming them publicly would put him on very dangerous ground. It would be a...

Just remembered, what happened with the whole "dude selling gems" deal and him abusing Marilyn? Was he punished? Did he stop? We finally see her do something, and we're denied a resolution with a time skip.

@toolep2 Exactly, he's not rash. He's taking his time to make things right.

@Ophelia_Hecate Haha yeah, if anything, she's growing to be understanding of his villainy. "Well what's wrong with killing people if they're trying to kill you first?"

I don't get it, she knows Dietrich lives through everything, since he has to be in the story later. So why is she acting like he's in real danger? It even sounds like she knows this event from the story, so she knows Dietrich is going to be fine. It's like the author wants to keep the suspense...

I like the grandfather, but I'm wondering how old he is. It seems that Tia's troubles are because the two competent family members who appreciated her died in short succession at fairly young ages. Her father when she was 11, and her grandfather when she was about 17 if I remember correctly? If...

Haha. "I don't have a place to return to, where to sleep, or even anything to eat, but I'm going to pretend I don't trust you while taking your food and living in your house." I get that him saving the demon queen earned him some gratitude, but maybe they could consider he was also the reason...

@kenreed it's not head cannon. It's stated outright in the story. Chapter 3: "I've been waiting to be with Luka for ten years..." Now granted, it could have just been horniness. But if you have a close relationship with somene, and find them attractive, maybe you ought to explore that before...

@Kaptainko if it goes like many of these, the author's need for the father to be cruel is over, so now he is going to be a doting father. Why she was so neglected in the first place and why he allowed it will never be analyzed, since that part of the plot is now over.