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    Mori de Seijo o Hirotta Saikyou no Kyuuketsu-hime ~Musume no Tamenara Kuni de Moassari Horoboshimasu!~ @COMIC - Vol. 2 Ch. 8

    P12 "I'm just making sure I'm won't make her sad" should be: I won't make her sad. I think " I'm not saddening her" is correct too but a bit too eloquent Also how did they find out Gordon was a spy? Did I miss something or was it the mangaka skipping something from the novel?
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    RuriDragon - Ch. 27 - Barely Weighs A Thing

    Meh. Started super interesting during the first few chapters. But I have to admit I just skipped through the last dozen or so. This manga had so much potential, but it seems the mangaka doesn't really know how to harness it. Instead of focusing on the MC half dragon traits and challenges that...
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    Garbage Brave: Isekai ni Shoukan Sare Suterareta Yuusha no Fukushuu Monogatari - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

    These itsekai usually lose all potential in the first chapters during the "shitsekai bingo". Appraisal skill, Visible UI, Character that's considerd weak but is actually op for no reason, XP level Status, obvious betrayal, buying slaves Get enough of these and the isekai is beyond redemption...
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    Mori de Seijo o Hirotta Saikyou no Kyuuketsu-hime ~Musume no Tamenara Kuni de Moassari Horoboshimasu!~ @COMIC - Vol. 2 Ch. 6

    Thanks for the upload. Overall pretty mediocre for now, but at least the author didn't turn MC incompetent during the hostage exchange like I have expected. For now at least... In fact turning OP MCs incompetent and pissing off readers is so common there should be a tag for it. One of the...
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    Mori de Seijo o Hirotta Saikyou no Kyuuketsu-hime ~Musume no Tamenara Kuni de Moassari Horoboshimasu!~ @COMIC - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

    Not your fault. The mayority of readers thought that they were in the mansion. Me included. Towns without a single bystander in sight are pretty rare outside of the post apocalypse genre. The artist of this manga bit of more than he could chew, so visual cues are bad or non existent. That...
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    Lord Magear no Deshi - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - Pursuer and Pursued

    It's a foot bend inward. Technically not too weird except it's in an awkward position that will turn the foot sore if maintained for too long. But the mangaka was obviously lacking anatomy knowledge and skill to draw proper toes so he probably gave up midway.
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    Lord Magear no Deshi - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - Pursuer and Pursued

    It's a typical shonen. Paper thin story and super convenient plot points and character interactions, carried by unnecessary combat to appease young readers. That rat mercenary appears suddenly out of nowhere inside a forest even though MC was traveling for weeks by foot and carriage. Somehow he...
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    Mori de Seijo o Hirotta Saikyou no Kyuuketsu-hime ~Musume no Tamenara Kuni de Moassari Horoboshimasu!~ @COMIC - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    1000 years? That's crazy. Why isn't that mentioned in the manga? Does the mangaka not know the source material and has just taken the paid job of adapting it? Maybe he hasn't even read it, and has only gotten a rough story board from the author. That would explain some things.
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    Mori de Seijo o Hirotta Saikyou no Kyuuketsu-hime ~Musume no Tamenara Kuni de Moassari Horoboshimasu!~ @COMIC - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    Thanks for the explanation. I usually would argue that this is a mansion instead of a castle because it has windows on the first floor and no defensive abilities. But it also has no shadows and is standing on empty city pavement. So what do I know what the mangaka intended to illustrate here...
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    Mori de Seijo o Hirotta Saikyou no Kyuuketsu-hime ~Musume no Tamenara Kuni de Moassari Horoboshimasu!~ @COMIC - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    Additionally a common problem adaptations have is that the source material is usually already suffering from bad story writing. That's getting amplified when mangaka have no clue what they are doing. You are just supposed to translate text. You can't fix bad pacing with that. Thanks for your...
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    Senki Survival Saga - Isekai no Unmei wo Kaketa Mujintou Fujun Iseikouyuu - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - You die if you don't drink enough water!?

    Humans can't stomach stagnant contaminated water, period. It's a modern legend that there are some wild tribal people that can drink it. I have heard it sometimes from people who have no clue, but it's not true. People in Africa, India ect, that don't have access to clean drinking water, also...
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    Kono Sekai no Kouryakuhon o Hirotte Shimaimashita - Ch. 13 - The Ball Begins

    It may be easier to control carbon content but only if you have the right knowledge and tools. Fact is, historically it was easier to put carbon into iron than take it out again. Early furnaces that (accidentally) reached temperatures to liquify iron produced pig iron. Until the 14. century it...
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    Kono Sekai no Kouryakuhon o Hirotte Shimaimashita - Ch. 13 - The Ball Begins

    Blast furnaces that are able to produce liquid steel have been available since the early middle ages (12 cencury or so). But usually making liquid steel was prevented on purpose by cooling them down. Liquid steel intakes too much carbon gets hard and brittle and therefore unable to work with in...
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    Kono Sekai no Kouryakuhon o Hirotte Shimaimashita - Ch. 13 - The Ball Begins

    We are back boys let's gooooo. Finally a new chapter
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    Dungeon ni Hisomu Yandere na Kanojo ni Ore wa Nandomo Korosareru - Vol. 5 Ch. 21

    Let me take a wild guess. Egg will turn into a new waifu who will get murdered by his yandere hero girlfriend again. Because even though she is sealed in the dungeon, she is somehow still able to effortlessly appear in front of MC like a wet dream. I think I'm starting to be able to predict this...
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    Isekai Ojisan - Vol. 13 Ch. 64

    Ojisan was dropping spoilers throughout the whole manga though. Seems like that triggered memory spirit is a recent introduction.
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    Groundless - Vol. 3 Ch. 13 - Okay, let's rest!

    She got cheated out of her second bread loaf.:meguuusad:
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    Groundless - Vol. 3 Ch. 12.1 - The eye of the grim reaper (Part 2)

    Nice to see Sophia depicted with human weaknesses, instead of being superhuman. Getting tired and having regrets ect One small criticism is she always aiming for headshots, which is untypical for snipers due to irregular head movements. Except if that great arc. I'm super happy I rediscovered...
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    Groundless - Vol. 2 Ch. 9 - Miracles don't happen twice

    Are there pages missing between 17 and 18. They went from defensive to surrender us very abrupt
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