The art is not very good at all. Very sketch-like, and doesn't convey action well. Running, for instance, in chapter 1 doesn't look like running as much as shuffling.
At least the faces are decent.
Two toned hair would probably have been a better choice, since they made a point of saying black hair was taboo (iirc).
But hey, I'm not their publisher.
Hey, at least it got a conclusion. It showed us where the story was going, and didn't have to stagger to the ending. It was a bit rushed, but had promise and showed glimpses of interesting ideas.
That's Fine, imo.
...okay, this last chapter is...very bad.
I understand it--guy turned girl experiments. Fine.
Then it goes into derp central. Not even particularly funny derp central. More cringy than funny.