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Errors: "You look terrible on your face" -- no one would say this. "Your face looks terrible", or just "You look terrible." "...we go somewhere after the school" -- "...we go somewhere after school."

TYPO: page 30, "some-aone" for "someone"

Thank for you the translation, but please look up something about hyphenation in English. You're not supposed to just break the word at whatever letter hits the right-hand edge, syllable boundaries matter. I didn't understand what most of the T/Ns were saying or referring to.

page 1: "were lovers" -> "we're lovers" page 2: "prope-rly" -> "proper-ly" page 3: "liar" doesn't make sense in context; "I'm lying" would. page 5: "embarrassing" is the proper spelling page 6: "Im" -> "I'm" page 8: "partners" -> "partner's". "its rika" -> "it's rika" page 9: "your going" ->...

That was hilarious!

Thanks! mettling -> meddling

The north, which didn't grow rice, ate rice gruel for breakfast?

Only two chapters left in the volume, or the whole series?

Thanks for the translations! FWIW, I'd vote for keeping the honorifics. Maybe it won't matter much for this work, but sometimes they do matter, and then they're the best way of conveying changes or subtleties in interaction.

Frog and salamander "The moon is beautiful" "I cherish her more than a friend" We've got Xena levels of subtext here.

I forget, is she an actual aunt or just a social one? Is Minato Shino's cousin?

It's still missing two pages.

Some pages seem to be missing and/or out of order. 16 pages here, 20 on dynasty scans.

> No weapons There were guns, Molotov cocktails, zip-ties for hostage taking, and pipe bombs. Panic buttons had been ripped out of Congressional offices. If they'd actually caught up to Congresspeople, or if the bombs hadn't been found, there could have been a massacre. We're talking about...

> Since it seems official that Su-won was also out to kill Hak What. Where do you even get this?

Cursed chapter -- oh wait. "Then I laughed, because Kasumi WOULD NEVER say "there is too much food". NEVER! lol" It's still a dream!

Agent Smith is returning to the Core.

> hard M As in masochist? More like S for submissive. > Hmmm... Why do i feel that the princess is trying to brainwash Euphi in this chapter... I have no idea, given the princess is clearly doing the opposite. If anything she's trying to break brainwashing, except I don't think she thinks...

This chapter reminds me of this fanfic, in theme: https://archiveofourown.org/works/2747756

I'm sure they'll be good friends!