1/10 no Hanayome - Vol. 4 Ch. 32

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Hime is such a thot can't wait to see what happens to her in later chapters
 
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sfx is wrong on 18. its コンコン (knocking) and not コソコソ (stealthily/sneakily doing something, not even "whisper")

also, happy yall arent adding an extra N to your spelling of "ryuunosuke" for no reason anymore but yall should probably keep ryunosuke/ryuunosuke and ryu-kun/ryuu-kun consistent
 
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@DarknessAssassin no, youre not following the original. youre choosing to do one or two Us at random
its only ever written 竜, and while ryu and ryuu are each fine for it, the lack of consistency makes me wonder that there actually are five proofreaders and two people on quality

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Why are you suddenly translating Hime's name? Also, feels like you've confused a few speech bubbles like on page 12, or page 7 last chapter.
 

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