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[MangaDex]

 

[Xeredge]

That was... A lot to take in for a first chapter.

 

[otaku0gurl]

Translator-san you're too hard on yourself its not that bad
Thank you for the new chapter ^^

 

[arthdaw]

Oh my, i like it.

That kid is gonna go far

 

[Laughing_Snake]

Even if we ignore the quality of the translation


The manga's pacing is all over the place, I honestly started wondering if pages were missing or something...

 

[talas]

Uhhhmmm.... what?

 

[Mezhlauk]

Thanks for the chap

 

[Fresh_Asparagus]

@Laughing_Snake i agree. it seems like some pretty important parts of the story were just summed up in foot notes. I guess they just wanted to set up the background for the story and get it out of the way

 

[FeBriz]

From what I understood, this chapter implied this series' main romance would be between this new actually nice "heroine" and the cousin while the main character is trying to survive? I don't an issue with this. I actually like it quite a lot, but I feel I definitely got confused by the translation. An isekai from real Japan to game Japan is fun though.

 

[hedgemoney]

Wow, holly, shit. The manga skipped like half the story. Are they going to go through it like flash backs? Or just leave it out entirely? I mean, never before have I seen such skippage of the source material, especially since it was integral to establishing the character settings.

 

[No1Kenkaku]

Uh, what? Feels like they tried to squish an entire volume into one chapter.

 

[thunderbuggs]

@Laughing_Snake Maybe because it's an adaptation? It feels like this is a super condensed crash course in a story that already exists.

Still, I don't really like how the story jumps from place to place constantly, like how they just glossed over the mother's divorce, etc. It'd have been nice if they spent the time to build up to high school instead of just going bam bam bam bam bam we're teenagers now!!!

 

[KimmyChii]

So much info o:
Thanks for translating

 

[GodGinrai]

with using google translator

Maybe I'll wait until the stuff that isn't coming from Google Translate starts coming out correctly.

 

[Swearingpuppy354]

Oh hey you started posting here?nice!I like the translation it’s pretty decent!!
As for the manga, not so much I like the plot but the pacing is all over the place

 

[Kurbo]

Feels like I just read the summary of volume 1 of this manga, or some promotional manga for the light novel

 

[Serverclosed]

This was all over the place, hope it improves. Story-wise btw.

 

[yanyanamy]

Your translation seems fine, but the manga's pace is all over the pace. I think this is a promo for a light novel or a chapter 00 not chapter 1.

 

[Barajou]

That is... incredible pacing. Like they tried to put the first quarter or so of a story into a single chapter. Wow. Wow.

 

[SundayHaze]

The cover art feels like a scam lol it’s so pretty and then there’s the actual manga art,, I’m assuming the art used is the one from the novel cover but still 😭 it gets nice at the end actually but the art at the start is something else..