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The manga lack of bittersweet relationship betwen leon and. Main char...

The only one lacking in the novel is just the illustration ... Even though the wtiting is great.. but this manga destroyed the story pacing... The way its writing pace go around confusing the story.... Its just how bad the manga version is...
 
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Seems like a good story and i cant wait for the MC to have the 2 guys fight over as well if im getting the love vibes right ? hahaha
Thanks for the translations! keep it up !
 
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Tbh I'd rather see more of the MC and her love interests than the heroine and Kyousuke, who are pretty boring af.
 
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I love how MC is always stuck third wheeling lmfaoooo

Thank you for the translation!!
 
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It's jumping around less jarringly, maybe the writer is learning how to tell a story? It feels less out of order than the last few chapters did.
 
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Usually mangas like this whould’ve had an editor.
What in the world is the editor thinking to go around the pacing like this lol.

I’d rather see Leon and MC and possible the Shirayuki(?) guy hhh

But thank you for the translation!
 
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Thank you for your efforts in translating. I hope you don't take any of the comments about pacing to heart, it is obviously the fault of the artist and yes, even the editor. Even if you totally cut out every scrap of dialogue, it jumps locations with seemingly no rhyme or reason. It is a wonder we can make as much sense as we do of this.

It is sad though, to see what looks like an interesting premise get destroyed by their poor execution.
 
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Nice translation, the mangaka is just shoving plot down my throat, though. There's only so much bland oatmeal one person can eat.
 
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I read the novel and honestly disappointed how the mangaka completely changed the story
 
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Really, i feel bad for the author of the novel, for having their work being adapted into a manga like this.
 

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