@RisdonGP thank you very much for continuing onto the new chapters. I am not sure if it is just on my end, but am getting the whole chapter all mixed up and it makes it seems very confusing and hard to follow. I hope it is an issue with upload or on my end as it would be poor for the story to actually be laid out this way.
It is hard to determine if the translation is ok because of it being mixed up at least for me, but it should be ok. One note, I do appreciate the different font for the “gods”, but maybe also experiment with different colour font or colour outlines on the font for multi character speech bubbles In a panel or incorporeal character speeches.
Thank you again for all the work.