You did an amazing job for your first “proper” chapter, the only thing I’d say was less proper was your sizing and some placing of the words. example
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ne of the words was on the text next to it, and some text was to big for the bubble. I’m not sure how you’d fix it since I never did this type of thing, but maybe making the text smaller or using a different font for the letters may help with the size.