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Thanks for uploading.

I enjoy this but the pace of the story makes me worried it’ll take a long time to get anywhere. Looking forward to some god powers from the creator!
 
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You did an amazing job for your first “proper” chapter, the only thing I’d say was less proper was your sizing and some placing of the words. example:eek:ne of the words was on the text next to it, and some text was to big for the bubble. I’m not sure how you’d fix it since I never did this type of thing, but maybe making the text smaller or using a different font for the letters may help with the size.
 
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whether she likes cute things or not she's still an evil bitch along with all the other people there, they are all evil bastards that wants to sacrifice kids.
 
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Yeah, chapter 2 technically shouldn't be on this site anymore as the original translator and uploader removed it but not before aggregators ripped from here and that's where you probably found it @Jenzelta and reuploaded it to here.
The comments led to them not feeling appreciated for their work, and removed it within a day of posting. I doubt the OT will care as long as their name isn't attached to it though.
 
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I'm not seeing the genderswapped tag, so the mc just looks like a girl and is a boy or adrogynus (neither).
 
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It'd be funny if the Elf start to develop maternal instincts towards the MC
 
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that cover is a dead giveaway that the hooded person knows who he is
 

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