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I have decided to upload this without the color pages. I think they're not worth making everyone wait. If I get them, I'll edit them and re-upload it. 3 pages, it's a minute.
 
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Thank you for the chapters.

What a nice ending.

She still killed her mother just to hang out with her friends, but at least she admitted it was self-centred.
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i think its nice that hanyuu is (or did) erase rika's memory of killing her mother (or if its like she said and its all a dream)
 
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Typo on page 6 : "... step sown." >> "... step down."
Typo on page 35 : "... in ehat He sent." >> "... in what He sent."
Typo on page 38 : "Satoko-chan, Marbara-san, Mion-san ..." >> "Satoko-chan, Maebara-san, Mion-san ..."
Typo on page 45 : "... believed you's come back too ..." >> "... believed you'd come back too ..."
Typo on page 47 : confort >> comfort
Typo on page 49 : big brudder >> big brother
Typo on page 58 : in effect >> in fact
 
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@nutjob
Thank you a lot, it looks like I got a bit carried away in this last one xD
Anyway, the last 2 ones are ok. When Rika is in Bern mode uses this kind of weird expressions. As for Satoko, I find all the "Nii-Nii" thing so otaku i can stand it, so I went with the Funimation's "Big Brudder".
 

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