Holy ufffff, this is only 8 pages and I couldn't finish it because GOD DAMN! there are so many mistakes, it doesn't even look like typing mistakes, is like some weird stuff is happening with his keyboard! I wouldn't usually be so hard on free stuff but like some people said, why would you work on a series that had a dedicated group already? If you say "Because I like the manga" the why not start from the begining ? if you only want to take the attention that Hatigarm worked so hard to get, with such poor work I'm going to ignore you anyway.