Nice work Luxy, it doesnt feel butchered at all only a couple of small things like this line in the center left panel in page 10: who was driven out into a separate "Estate?", and the center top panel in page 12: if you do "to" not take it seriously, just remove that "to".
Other than that the translation was fluid and easy on the eye, keep it up and good luck with your studies and take your time.
Thanks for the upload.