@Luxy hey man good job here seeing how you are apparently new to this stuff. So let me ask do you use PS? and if so how do you clean the bubbles? because there's weird stuff there that shouldn't happen when cleaning normally^^ (well i think even with something like gimp it shouldn't happen)
if you need some tips go ahead and ask, there's probably many people here that can help you get better (if you want)
It's endearing to watch the innocent but long-suffering girl trying to clumsily approach her savior, the jaded assassin, but, damn, the shadow of tragedy is shrouding this series deeply and heavily.
Take your time. School is way more important in the long run than appeasing random people on the internet with free translation, free editing, free type setting, and free QC.