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[MangaDex]

 

[Echonic]

Man this manga had an horrible introduction. it's the kinda the introduction you'd make if the manga was only about a group of people who get equal screen time and not two main characters, because of this introduction I automatically assumed it was going to be the first guy with blue hair and can't get him out of my head as a not main character. because I now favor the blue guy I automatically hate the riajuu looking dude... why couldn't it just of started with the riajuu looking dude at least then I could of looked at that blue guy as a nobody.

 

[Lanfear]

i'm so jealous!

 

[Akabane]

I feel like this chapter should of just started on page 19

 

[kronix]

more pls

 

[WoodyCyber]

interesting

 

[Tesla]

I can see the next few sentences:

Hero: I need to save the world and kill the Demon King?

Demon (Devil?) Queen: No, just marry her...

🤣

 

[reeeelmao]

Long strip is terrible.

 

[Velsy]

ummmmmmm if the queens that dam powerful, why need those heros at all loool. Oh wait, they can carry her luggage, I get it now.

 

[john622007]

Take out at least 5 pages of power bolt filler and it would have been a waaay better start.

 

[NP-3228]

form the mid boss sprouts the final boss, but then the secret final boss appears. Then a wild last boss...

 

[Limnir]

The writing on this is all over the place and quite terrible. The story keeps jumping back and forth and I couldn't even tell who the main character was at the start, I thought it was the spiky-haired kid.

Well, guess that's what you get from League of Legends players (DotA is the superior game).

 

[Wildfire_desu]

"a city on earth" or to be very specific, a very slightly edited stock photo from somewhere on Manhattan island

 

[domunobu]

This MC is the most blatant self-insert ever. His jacket literally has "ME" written on it.

 

[lenteraneko]

The demon wife design is awesomely hot, but sadly, MC and the story is a bit of a mess...

 

[mahtan]

Noob making excuses for dying to a gank...
Who says "use cc"??

 

[Aereus]

@lenteraneko It's a Chinese manhua, story being bit of a mess is to be expected. Dunno why exactly, if its due to the censorship guidelines in China or what but it always seems to be this way.

 

[DevLogger]

@reeeelmao: What is series is your avatar from? Cute sluts are good.