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"I was having so much fun, I forgot about Newton's first law."

Yeah, this is adorable.
 
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I figure I should say this, in case you ever revisit these chapters. "Mine Mother" doesn't work. English has had the rules around articles and possessives changing form around words starting with a consonant or verb for a very long time. A hand, an angel, thy hand, thine own hand, etc.. If you want to use some pretend Olde English for this guy, use "Mother Mine" instead, and "My Mother" or "Dear(est) Mother (Mine)."
 

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