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Seems okay but you could use a different font

Also the phrase "Sleeping in here?" sounds a bit awkward because it doesn't have a subject.
 
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Aside from the call-out part, a quality checker/proof reader should make it pretty good
 
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is there really nothing better than isekai manga
are we doomed?
 
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Please continue. My only criticism is like others have said about an easier to read font. Im not very picky as long as I can continue reading. Thanks
 
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please continue. I'm okay with the quality. Who wouldn't, aside piece of trash that will never even make the tiniest effort for anyone else.
 
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It seems fine to me!
And don't worry even if it's not perfect, something is still better than nothing, people will appreciate your work!
 

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