@MrFroztee redoing TS and grammar fixes is fine, but could you not make up dialogue that doesn't exist in the japanese version?
And use better raws than the
JPG GWR images. I thought you claimed you were updating the cleans or whatever, but you're just copying their images.
Also, learn how to stroke text.
On top of that, in what world is "!!" and a"wha-" or "gah" an equivalent? Inserting dialogue where there was originally none...
I could go on... But really, why do this when rips of the official viz version that is 3000px height in size, with full typeset SFX, and perfectly good translation/grammar exist? At least go up to par with that before you pretend you're doing fans a favor.