@slime_sleeper
I never said I was a pro. I just have standards. The first and most important is that the dialogue is actually coherent English if it's an English release.
Revitalizing interest is never necessary.
You gain points for not trying to profit off of this, but if you can't do the job yourself to a minimum degree, it doesn't mean you should still try.
Find a group and ask them, or find a proofreader. Your typesetting was pretty awful too, but that can be easily fixed by reading a tutorial and using appropriate software.
All scanlation, beyond the ones that truly have the mangaka's consent (or own the license), is illegal. It's theft if their work. And if you're going to do it, especially if you're going to do it because you enjoy their work, you had best put some actual effort into it. It's the least you can do.