A Galaxy Next Door - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - A Fever and a Handshake

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The romance is good, but it feels like the author is rushing it a bit. Generally speaking characters don’t believe it when you say you’re from another planet and the girl herself is doing a really bad job at explaining it (like she keeps seeing that she left the “island”, but is an alien). When characters finally do believe that the other character is an alien they’re usually VERY surprised or something. And the mc is just asking no questions (like what the whole princess deal is about, or why her family just let a princess leave, or what he pricked his hand on that made it so he couldn’t be apart from her, or just anything). I like romances that get to the point (and don’t take 50 chapters for characters to confess and another 20 for the other character to confess and them to date), but this one doesn’t fit the setting. An extra chapter before getting to the alien bit and some more reactions and questioning is all it needs.
 
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Falling sick when they are separated?!
Sounds like a Shoujo manga line 😂


Thanks for the chapter!
 
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nice, finally someone pick this up, thank you for the chapter
 

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