A panel from the manga I'm creating. (I accept suggestions and criticisms)

[John_McEnroe]

I am drawing a manga with a friend (he makes the script and the story in general, i just draw it). We will post it here and Medibang.com very soon. This is a double spread page from the first chapter of the project. Do you like the style, boys?

 

[Richman]

Ichi, Ni and Kevin?
Well all i can say is that it looks damn good.

 

[John_McEnroe]

@Richman Thanks man, this time no one is dumb XD

 

[421cookies]

Reduce canvas size. The tone is way too harsh on normal full hd display.

 

[John_McEnroe]

@421cookies Thank you. I can't really notice those details right now. Does it look like grayish intersected lines instead of dots?

 

[justforthelulz]

I have no idea what the actual context is, but I love her attitude that seems to say, "I'm too tired for this bullshit."

 

[John_McEnroe]

@justforthelulz THAT's literally the expression I was looking for XD

 

[421cookies]

@John_McEnroe It looks like unsmooth shading with plenty of white specks on my phone.

 

[John_McEnroe]

@421cookies Ohhhhh, i see, Will reducing the canvas size fix the shading?, I draw with a big canvas size so it looks good on bigger displays too

 

[immortalartisan]

@john_mcEnroe looks great and imma take a guess at the story i can see horrifying monsters everywhere but they cant interact with anything so im just in a perpetual state of mental numbness

 

[runa]

@immortalartisan Sup. I'm working on the story together with @John_McEnroe. You are close on your guess, but not quite. I'm writing the story as I go, so I'm yet to fully flesh out the details. Found out I'm just not that good at thinking up the entire plot beforehand. Nice profile pic, btw. Love that game.

 

[John_McEnroe]

@immortalartisan In fact, what you mention is the synopsis of Mieruko chan. We've read it before putting hands at work, and no, the general idea is not to make anything like that (we don't even try to play in the field of horror/comedy). although, the concept is pretty close .

 

[pandascepter]

great2, keep it up.

Also ya guys late for the entry tezuka award sadly.

 

[runa]

@pandascepter Yeah. Deadlines are not our forte.

 

[immortalartisan]

@runa oh hey finally a fellow dwarf fortress fan and I assume there’s gonna be a better twist wanna chat about dwarf fortress in dms too?

 

[runa]

@immortalartisan Sure, man.

 

[Ginger_cat]

Just need to be more solid on color- is what I want to say but srly ITS AMAZING THOUGH I WILL BE WAITING FOR WHEN YOU PUBLISH ITTT

 

[lithraal]

@John_McEnroe not really critique, but i gotta say - this is awesome, please keep us with updates

 

[mymilkshakes]

Hey this is awesome!!