Nice! Just a heads-up, I think the pronouns might be wrong in one of the last panels: In the first part of the chapter, the OL very easily beats the Yankee, it seems that she's very experienced with this game while he's a complete beginner. Presumably, the Yankee looks up some strategy guide before challenging her the next day, so it makes more sense to write "He changed to a character that's more advantageous" and "He came here prepared".