A Story About Armored King and Captive Princess - Oneshot

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Goddamnit
Much potential in this one ^_^
Hope it will evolve into series
However, the 'princess' ' father is DOUBLE cruel. If the 'king' was not girl that would have gotten ugly very quickly
 
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It's... feasible to make it look like a normal marriage in most regards, but some parts of raising any child would become a bit difficult to fake unless they're very good at acting or have someone who can use illusion magic.

As for the pregnancy, easiest would be if they simply do it, get pregnant and then go abroad anonymously until it's over and then return with the child.
 
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@Aznereth
ikr? Send your son as a substitute hostage and if the knight was actually a dude he'd just kill the son and go after the king for deceiving him. Nice that it plays out as a comedy but it's still dark to think about.
 
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I imagine that the scumbag dad is going to be pretty confused if and when he gets invited to the baby shower.
 
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@Honshou I think the first page should say, "To offer his own daughter" referring to the father. The second bubble should say that he "does terrible things" or that he "sure has done a terrible thing". And then "It would be good". Overall, however, the translation is good and readable.
 
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oh you're right. I didn't notice it.
I'll fix it later since i won't be able to open my pc for weeks.
thanks for the correction.
 
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