Btw for people wondering why there's too much difference between the 2 chapters out, the other dude kind of rewrote the tls... At least thats what i think
@MrOGZ ye thats pmuch it
i generally like to ask "if this character were a native english speaker what would they say to express their sentiment here" instead of going by direct words
there're merits to both styles, of course, so even though my TLs here are pretty much a bastard child ive disowned its interesting that the readers get to see both methods if they want