Thanks for that. That page needed a second take in general since I really really didn't like the wording of... everything there.Page 15 the lines 'just like Aya changed for me. She's changing for me too.' Don't seem to make much sense in context-- is it possible the subject-object of one of those statments was reveresed so it'd be like:
'just like I've changed for aya. She's changing for me too.' It would match the overal theme and the immediate context statement 'each of us driven by the strange feelings in our chests.'
yes.really? you recommend an yuri story about glorifying cheating ???