After Being Kicked Out of Adventurers' Party for Being So Called Useless, I Developed a Skill Called "Weakness Spotting"

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Okay that description is just to weird.

Three outcasts Wish, Melphina, Lilium, and Noah a Merchant a Former Goddess a Demon Army Commander and a Reincarnater form a party and go on a adventure while helping each other overcome their past.

“Fun loser revival party life” begins!.... also something about global warming

Does this sound any better? Kinda sounds like the start to a joke though.
 
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Dude can this isekai writer stop making harem for once, for f*ck sake. Is it to draw people attention for their fetish girl? Just stick with one bitches or stick with actual storyline. This is why we don't get an actual story from this type genre no more. Make actual character bro, make actual story. You won't get anime for glazing these loli twintails enjoyer, or you will, idk japan is fucked up country anyways
 
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Slow-ass pacing.

Like... super abrupt set-up, followed by spreading out exposition over pages and pages of panels that all lead to
"She can join us"
And
"This is a bad guy"

I mean, we know she's gonna be asked to join with even a marginally sad tale or slightest reason; likewise, we know a person is a "bad guy" when they are stealing things while you watch.
And the second point is really kinda concerning in these manga; I don't believe most people need pages and pages of somebody committing every known crime and violating every biblical commandment, followed by a rape-spree, just to think they should stop!
We got it! They're trash! We know!

Like, 5 pages of intro, then 20 pages of criming, and 2 pages of MC saying "enough!" and a fighting-stance cliffhanger.

I am Six chapters in (6!), and it already feels like I've read this story a hundred times...:aquadrink:
 

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