The English in this manhua is quite rough, which detracts from the overall immersion and can make it difficult to understand at times. There were a few instances where I simply had to accept that I wouldn't be able to comprehend what the writing was trying to convey. However, I must admit that in some parts, the broken English added a certain charm and gave the characters a quirky personality. But could just be me.
I'm also really into the story so it's not bugging me too bad.