After the Tale - Oneshot

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Its a good "romantic" story
Yeah, gave me vibes of "not correct, but understandable" kinda thing. Like, the girl was robbed of a year from her life, but at least the man explained everything to her -his pain of losing someone dear, his guilty conscience at not searching for a way of exorcising his dearest spirit from her body, his wish to enjoy the last moment with his loved one. Im not saying it's ok to hijack someone else's body, especially when they are at their development stage.

Idk how to say this without being dismissive, but idk what else to say. At least she understand and accepts the situation, even though it caused very significant changes in her life.

I'm bad at writing emotions. Sorry if I offend someone
 
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Its a good "romantic" story
Bro, I don't know how to explain the feeling after reading this oneshot, but I know that this oneshot is really good.
Thanks for the TL
Yeah, gave me vibes of "not correct, but understandable" kinda thing. Like, the girl was robbed of a year from her life, but at least the man explained everything to her -his pain of losing someone dear, his guilty conscience at not searching for a way of exorcising his dearest spirit from her body, his wish to enjoy the last moment with his loved one. Im not saying it's ok to hijack someone else's body, especially when they are at their development stage.

Idk how to say this without being dismissive, but idk what else to say. At least she understand and accepts the situation, even though it caused very significant changes in her life.

I'm bad at writing emotions. Sorry if I offend someone
 
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Neat. It would be interesting to see this story as something closer to a full length novel. I'm not sure an extended manga version would work, though...
 
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Started reading this mangaka's other works because of this one. Wish MD finished implementing that "follow author" feature.
Check out Osana Najimi no Majo ni Tsuite if you like this one. A collection of four other oneshots.
 
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I didn't find it very satisfying; I think it'd have worked better if there were more horror-thriller elements and the ghost wasn't completely gone by the time the story started (and had a better defined personality, though I suppose that could be fixed with serialization).
 

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