Airplanes

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It can be found fully scanlated on other sites, but I'm afraid I can say it's all that great.

The premise may have been fine, but the characters are given far too little depth.

They each have troubles in the past, but neither are explored. They each have fears, but we only get a minimal amount of developement. They each start liking each other, but for no apparent reason.

The depth of the plot is shallow in such a way that I feel like I'm reading a summary of each chapter, an outline of the events, instead of the actual chapter itself. The main characters themselves almost seem like strangers, even by the end.

This one should've been more developed before being published. It feels too barebones. However, I will say the art is well done.
 

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