Thought I reviewed this before
Loved it, I love how it confronts "plot armour" and works around it, as with pretty much any story, you're not concerned the mc will die, and this directly confronts that
My main gripes would be the mc's personality retcon from early on,
the only female ajin is a typical backstory (somebody did note that the "ajin" that hugged her kinda looked like mc's, so, it'd be cool if it went around helping people, as it looks to have a sense of morality, the train crash in the beginning),
and the retcon of ajins being rare to then the anti-ajin person being one, and an Olympic gold medalist being one,
antagonist's defeat is THE end, I would've preferred at least one other antagonist,
ending friend showing up was very contrived
I do really like the "will materalised" dynamic, very very unique, you could say it's soul or something
The thought experiment too of swampman, and the biker accident sort of proving it in such a strange way, so cool
An invisible threat unless it directs its malice is cool, recording and seeing bodies fly being ripped apart, or the hospital scene in the beginning
So many cool things, with good explanation for how it all happens
Enemies sharing memories on accident might've been my favourite moment, just so cool, and it ends so well (Why that's neat, just the extreme contrast to them getting the power, him good initially then tortured, her bad initially then put under watch, his Dad basically loved him, but her Dad didn't, it's good)
ch19 I think it was, just so tense, maybe the most tense I've ever been reading something, pure 'wow'
7/10, I can't really give it 10
Ending is fine, characters are fairly good, worldbuilding is amazing (many many cool things done well), art is amazing, I feel if it was rewritten just a bit, it'd easily be 10/10, something to go back to
