Akdang-deul ui Huwonja ga Doeeotda - Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[SpacelessRex]

I dunno who uploaded this but thanks for the chapter! It’s always great to see new series get some attention.

 

[Bombywolf]

Got to say the pacing felt rushed

 

[PreStoneX]

Got to say the pacing felt rushed

The first 10 years is rushed on purpose

 

[Rizkid1412]

Tbf, you wouldn't like an adult grooming children to like hin

 

[Kllick]

Got to say the pacing felt rushed

Soon you won't see loli yutia. Poor that guy who commented on previous chapters about liking yandere loli

 

[XX_Sky_XX]

Thanks for the chapter!! ❤️❤️❤️

 

[ApolloX1209]

Evan developed an incredible skill of fetch ahahaha XD

 

[Scrabbleman]

Look at him, staring at his next victim all menacingly from the 2nd floor above--Oops, he's dead

 

[kmd3133]

They r conquering the world for him but he doesnt even know.

 

[Psychronia]

Yeah, this separation is better for beating any grooming allegations anyway. Bro is literally just sponsoring some kids he's never met.

 

[gum_rummy]

He wanted to retire to the countryside with his assistant/platonic boyfriend/bodyguard.

 

[chiga-kun]

unkowing mastermind if you permit

 

[Athuro10]

Hahahahahaha I guess he will know about them pretty sooner or later aint it?

 

[eLLoydz]

This is genuinely Eminence in the Shadow but Cid isn't dumbasf

 

[Drniz0707]

Next time it will be the king

 

[Churkey]

We still in the setup it seems, well, if it means they can get even cooler drip and look cooler in the future, so be it!

 

[Biodrum]

God that toast looks divine

Now I’m hungry

 

[ExecutiveDirector]

So it’s a stupider erosion of Emminence in Shadow.

The rushed pacing is a concern. It’d have been interesting to watch the kids grow into Blue Moon assassins. Also the MC directly interacting with the kids wouldn’t need to bepervy. Influence directly focused could have positive outcomes in preventing the kids from growing into monsters. I’d notwant to leave their development up to chance. Seeing the MC juggle their interactions from the shadows while dealing with his villainous brothers would have been a good story potentially.

We will see where this goes but it definitely feels like we rushed though some good storytelling.