Akuryou - Oneshot

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I just did a second reading of this and noticed that the narration fits well in both possible points of view. Just replace when reading page 2, “Nami’s always been like this” with “Mayu’s always been like this,” and the effect on the second read becomes perfect.
 
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YEAH FINE JUST RIP MY HEART OUT, NOT LIKE I NEEDED IT ANYWAYS........
 
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OH SHID THAT FUCKING PLOT TWIST AT THE FUCKING END OH MY GOD HOLY SHIT I FUCKING DIDNT SEE THAT COMING
 
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Saw that from far away. I feel like I have read similar story with same plot twist weeks ago.
 
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Saw the twist coming but thought it would be the other way around.
 
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@Blackrobe , @Purplelibraryguy , me three.
It's not like read something similar before. More like, if you read tons of manga, you get the sense to predict plot twists depending on finest details.
Also, it's a way to detect that we're too much of otaku.
 

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