Akutou Ikka no Mana Musume, Tensei Saki mo Otome Game no Gokudou Reijou deshita: Saijoukyuu Rank no Akuyaku-sama, Sono Dekiai wa Fuyou desu! - Vol. 2…

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I believe page 30 and 31 are in the correct intended order, but it feels like the conversation would have been better if the author switched the pages.
 
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the pace is kinda slow, a shame because the idea is not half bad
I feel strange saying it, since she essentially brings it up every chapter -- but basically we've been experiencing "the story before the story." We're just now at the point that the game's story starts...and how she has to remind us each time.
 
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Me who barely care about the romance and is just waiting to see whether FL gets a surface dweller friend soon™️, and of course seeing her futile attempt at hiding her background is entertaining.

Can't wait for next chapter.
 

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