Akuyaku Kizoku to shite Hitsuyou na Sore - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Holy shit, like 3 pages in and we get hit with the DARK HOLE incantation I'm sorry I ain't reading the next few chapters of brainrot
 
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Wait what? Both the protagonist and MC have asian names but the prince of the country's name is Michael????
 
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Oh boy.... he's not going to want to avoid a death that shouldn't logically happen if he doesn't become evil like the original.... right???

It feels kinda half assed cause he's a completely different person so obviously, the results should also be different.....
From what I understand this WAS an option he considered. He simply doesn't want to suck up to the hero.
 
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Not being an evil d*** doesn't mean he has to suck up to the hero...
The thing is, from how this kinds of stories go the "Hero" probably has a very monochromatic "with me or against me" view of the world. So if he's not gonna suck up to him, MC has to be prepared to be his enemy. And don't forget its explained to us that the magical ability of MC's family allows the heir to become more powerful the more he's feared and hated + his family already has a terrible reputation, so why not take advantage of that and kill two birds with one stone?
 
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The thing is, from how this kinds of stories go the "Hero" probably has a very monochromatic "with me or against me" view of the world. So if he's not gonna suck up to him, MC has to be prepared to be his enemy. And don't forget its explained to us that the magical ability of MC's family allows the heir to become more powerful the more he's feared and hated + his family already has a terrible reputation, so why not take advantage of that and kill two birds with one stone?
That just feels like lazy writing to make a really forced conflict....
 
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Wait what? Both the protagonist and MC have asian names but the prince of the country's name is Michael????
MC's name is a bad translation, as others have pointed out. Maybe the same for the hero.
This "world" is a novel, expect weird shits.
 
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Whenever an author uses a supernatural force to make everyone automatically hate the protagonist, it feels like they’re admitting they don’t know how to write a good disliked character. Instead of creating a protagonist whose actions, personality, choices, or circumstances naturally make people turn against them, they take an easy way out. This removes any real reason for the hatred and makes the other characters’ reactions feel empty and shallow.
 
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So... his "power" is what, now? Intimidation? Or being feared (which is literally intimidation)? And the more people who are intimidated by him, the more powerful it is?

But... he also has sword skills and magic?

What is the fucking use of that shit?!

And is he a merchant or a Duke?
Because those are two radically different things!

This whole chapter makes NO fucking sense, and people just buying this shit like a Boomer on Facebook.
 

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