I felt like this chapter in particular was a little bit rushed, or at least the conflict didn't have quite enough time to sink in before it was resolved, but still sweet in the end all the same.
To be honest, no matter what illegal stuff he does or whom he kills, Len's always going to be a better person, than his bitch brother, who had sent people to rape his very own fiancée.
The pacing feel off? Probably a side effect from the partial chapter release schedule in Japan..... I wanna enjoy this but the scene transitions seem off as well.