No, thematically this is the correct way to present things. It's important to know the real premise of the plot then slowly build up each character into the version of them that CAN save Fiona.Seeing the last 2 chapters and this one, are we even sure that the loop we’re seeing are in the right order ? Maybe this one was before the one from chapter 1-10, or way after… or maybe I’m reading to far. I guess every char that was in the party will get a loop at some point
Exactly!Dad: "Get strong"
Lauro: "I got strong father"
Dad: "Now get weak"
Lauro: "????"
Dad: "Lul"
Thanks for the chapters!