Albus Changes the World - Ch. 23 - Sorcerer

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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26
  • p1 with a demon race -> with a demon // with one of the demon race
  • p2 in god too -> in god, too
  • p6 A while ago [...] has emerged -> A while ago [...] emerged
  • p6 A prodigy who appears once in a century -> A once-in-a-century prodigy [optional]
  • p9 It'll disappear -> They'll disappear
  • p9 make it disappear -> make them disappear
  • p11 generous too -> generous, too
  • p11 capital and my trip expenses -> capital, and for my trip expenses
  • p12 costs for maintaining the workshop and travel expenses -> costs for maintaining the workshop, and travel expenses
  • p13 for the graduate -> for the graduates // for all graduates // for each graduate
  • p13 around the world helping people -> around the world, helping people
  • p16 Someone is getting rejected -> Someone got rejected
 

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