@tokuzawa_keisuke dude seriously for your own good, stop translating this i know you hate it too. It's painful to see this when the author decided the MC to be braindead and dense as fck, it hurts my soul, there's a lot of better manga out there without fcking braindead MC
Get an editor, one that either has English as first language or is fully bilingual. This is borderline unreadable. I'm one hundred percent sure there is some content lost in the horrors of translations here.
I'm dead serious. I understand that you can't expect a fan translator to perfectly wield a language, but you can expect them to find someone who can help them out in their shortcomings. You can find someone you could explain what you mean, and they would then put it as text.
Don't worry too much about the criticism. We're on the internet so some people will always go "waaah, how do you dare to spend time and effort doing something for our sake, for free, without it being perfect?", but they often underestimate how hard it is to do it. And even if you're new at this you have the right mindset, this helps a lot to improve your work further.
At last someone translate it.
And yes, MC it trash-level. But manga still readable.
Even when normal (really normal, not japanese "normal") MC can be much better. Well, we still have Parallel Paradise and Peter Grill, at least.