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F Fishyyy Active member Joined Sep 22, 2024 Messages 7 Saturday at 8:34 PM #2 Pretty decent story although the ending did seem quite rushed. Thank you for the scanlation!!!
K kingdudman Dex-chan lover Joined Aug 18, 2020 Messages 650 Saturday at 11:21 PM #3 Thanks for finishing this up
BakedBanana Dex-chan lover Joined Nov 18, 2018 Messages 16,237 Sunday at 4:11 AM #4 Meh. At least it had good art. Thanks for the translation.
Rxnfr Double-page supporter Joined Jan 8, 2023 Messages 54 Sunday at 4:53 AM #5 too fast and not developing the way i wished for, but was a good ride nonetheless. thanks for translating this
too fast and not developing the way i wished for, but was a good ride nonetheless. thanks for translating this
W Wanderer00 Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 10, 2023 Messages 353 Sunday at 11:41 AM #7 Well, the story could have been longer, more fleshed out, and given more development amd depth to the characters, but the art and ending was nice
Well, the story could have been longer, more fleshed out, and given more development amd depth to the characters, but the art and ending was nice
K KappaDvorak Dex-chan lover Joined Sep 3, 2019 Messages 567 Yesterday at 4:27 AM #8 I agree that it felt rushed. I was hoping better pacing and development. so many things can go in a better direction instead of being a mcguffin.
I agree that it felt rushed. I was hoping better pacing and development. so many things can go in a better direction instead of being a mcguffin.
W Wanderer00 Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 10, 2023 Messages 353 Yesterday at 8:35 PM #10 KappaDvorak said: I agree that it felt rushed. I was hoping better pacing and development. so many things can go in a better direction instead of being a mcguffin. Click to expand... Would have been interesting to for example find out more about everyone's past, and more time to develop the relationship between the main couple Last edited: Yesterday at 11:43 PM
KappaDvorak said: I agree that it felt rushed. I was hoping better pacing and development. so many things can go in a better direction instead of being a mcguffin. Click to expand... Would have been interesting to for example find out more about everyone's past, and more time to develop the relationship between the main couple