Alt Account Trap! - Ch. 20 - Finale

[dontprepublish]

Perfectly mid, main character is surprisingly the best written (I mean the plot only has 3 major characters but still, he’s a well portrayed dorky try hard type) shy girl is honestly all over the place but I guess that makes sense with her personality, noona is meh.

To be honest it’s a good thing the plot was short, I’m not exactly expecting peak cinema when reading what is essentially porn but the way my eyes rolled when the green haired girl from MC’s backstory randomly showed up you’d think they would’ve slid out of my skull, keeping it short kept it focused on the mc which is good and thankfully stopped FMC from doing anything more cringe than she already was, I kinda think the ending is a cop out since Noona’s reaction to the MC dating someone cosplayed as her is NOT one of a woman in a relationship, hell none of her behavior is really but she wasn’t in the running anyway since she’s not on the cover so meh.

6/10, could’ve done without the “dress up as my crush and let me fuck you” plot, it makes all the major characters look stupid for not stopping it immediately since secrecy is paramount and if you wanted to draw more of MC fucking noona just have them get together and break up, worst arc for sure

 

[tragedydesu]

i kinda regret reading this
in one hand the relationship btw the main couple is so cute , in the other hand the ending gave me some serious NTR vibes even if it wasnt intentional by the author

 

[bestbud]

That wasn't too bad. I'll give it a 7/10.
I definitely think the story could've been much longer though, to flesh out the relationship between MC and Jiah.
I had an inkling that the two were going to be endgame from the start, but still..
I think it would be much better if we took out the Seola-cosplaying part entirely, and replaced it with him going out on dates with Jiah as herself instead. That part just felt a bit weird to me.
Either that, or don't rush it and make the ending them hanging out with each other, but not quite boyfriend-girlfriend yet

 

[jc9]

IDK how you can treat last part as NTR, even for BSS it would be a stretch., there was almost no interaction between Seola and MC. From fhe way she worded it in ch19, it also doesn't look like some scary abuse of authority like people throw around. It was a full circle to the beginning/possible teaser for another work, no need to read too much into it.

What i kinda didn't like is FMC accepting her role as backup option. She poured her feelings out, got hit with a rather brutal rejection, and when MC also got rejected he crawled his way back to her. Would be better if he realized that before confessing to Seola, or if we did not get a happy ending - you had your chance bro, you wasted it, live with the consequences.