While I did prefer this version, I'm bit sad that, differently from previous version, the Takkun - Yozora couple remained static (already formed, and wasn't outed in the story and the only "semi-proper" couple moments were basically in the side stories). I also wished the author would flesh out Takkun volleyball game, starting from Takkun insecurities about her own body and condition to "hey I'm having fun I can actually do this", and maybe how the realization affected her (maybe trying to slowly building up endurance). Also who won that damn game? If it was against other unspecified members I could accept, but considering that this was a intra club fight and that I find difficult to believe that 2 people that love to brag wouldn't discuss the game at all, it would have been nice to have a closure in story.