Ame Demo Hare Demo - Vol. 3 Ch. 19

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This version of the story was so good, it really improves on the original, everyone gets more scenes and development (and the best part is that everyone is gayer).

Super duper good.
 
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While I did prefer this version, I'm bit sad that, differently from previous version, the Takkun - Yozora couple remained static (already formed, and wasn't outed in the story and the only "semi-proper" couple moments were basically in the side stories). I also wished the author would flesh out Takkun volleyball game, starting from Takkun insecurities about her own body and condition to "hey I'm having fun I can actually do this", and maybe how the realization affected her (maybe trying to slowly building up endurance). Also who won that damn game? If it was against other unspecified members I could accept, but considering that this was a intra club fight and that I find difficult to believe that 2 people that love to brag wouldn't discuss the game at all, it would have been nice to have a closure in story.
 
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This was really good. Very wholesome. I loved it from start to finish. It really ended well.
Tho I would have liked to see extras about the other couples. Just one chapter each couple. Either way still really good.
 
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I'm dead everyone knows them too well and still barged in lmao help
 

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