Thanks again for all your hard work! It always brightens my day when a new chapter of this gets released. There are a some minor grammar/spelling mistakes I noticed:
Pg. 1, Last word in episode summary box-
Pg. 5, 2nd/3rd panel, 2nd/3rd/4th bubble-
- “DISTURBANCE” and “INCONVENIENCE” should be swapped (and since it’s an apology, for it to sound more formal, disturbance should be plur
Pg. 13, 2nd to last panel, 2nd bubble-
- It should either be “You also aren’t really interested in having children?” or “You also aren’t really into having children?” (I think it should be the first one because it better fits her tone in the first part of the sentence)
Pg. 13, 2nd to last panel, 4th bubble-
Pg. 18, 5th panel, 1st bubble-
Pg. 19, 2nd panel, Akane thought bubble-
- “with” -> “by”
- Either “3000 times more sensitive!?” or “3000x sensitivity!?” (the second one is technically incorrect grammatically but it is used, usually when referring to a videogame stat. It would save space, but it would have more of a memey vibe and less like an official translation, depends on what you’re going for)
- “Sensibility” refers to emotional/social sensitivity, not sensitivity to physical stimuli, so “sensitivity” is correct here
Pg. 20, 2nd panel, 1st bubble-
- “classificated” -> “classified” (classificated is not a real word)
Pg. 32, 2nd bubble-
- Did you mean “IoT” or “lot”? Looking up IoT devices (I didn’t know what they were) it would make sense I think, but if you meant “lot” it should be “A lot of devices get hijacked”
Keep up the good work! Hope all is well with all of you.
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