Won't say it's bad, but in terms of an "alternate" take on the story it seems to play fast and loose with what's "canon" in the game world.
If memory serves correctly, wasn't the gala where Angie issues the challenge to Livia? The whole thing is just glossed over and the challenge never happens? Even if it occurs later (haven't read the source material), that just kind of flies in the face of the whole "this is how it's supposed to happen" argument.
And if silencing the sky pirates was that easy, wouldn't that Stephanie girl have done it in the original story? Though I suppose Carla's confession would still pose a problem. But then she could've just silenced Carla's family too, no?
I won't judge anyone for liking this take, but from an outsider's perspective it just seems like a lot of wish fulfillment on the author's part.
But then again, I'm biased like that. I've never been fond of the whole "alternate" path some author's create. To each there own.
If memory serves correctly, wasn't the gala where Angie issues the challenge to Livia? The whole thing is just glossed over and the challenge never happens? Even if it occurs later (haven't read the source material), that just kind of flies in the face of the whole "this is how it's supposed to happen" argument.
And if silencing the sky pirates was that easy, wouldn't that Stephanie girl have done it in the original story? Though I suppose Carla's confession would still pose a problem. But then she could've just silenced Carla's family too, no?
I won't judge anyone for liking this take, but from an outsider's perspective it just seems like a lot of wish fulfillment on the author's part.
But then again, I'm biased like that. I've never been fond of the whole "alternate" path some author's create. To each there own.