"Ano Toki Tasukete Itadaita Monster Musume desu." Isekai Ossan Kyoushi Totsuzen no Moteki ni Konwaku suru - Ch. 34

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What the hell is the endgame to this stupid arc? Washio is more skeleton than man. The sliced drama here and there was fine in the beginning but now we got a whole meal?! Piling waayyyyyy too much content here.

If you dug the hole, dig deeper. If you realize you digged way too much and want to get out, that's the moment you fucked up and either way you go is going to be a bitch of a journey.
 

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first off wtf is an "oc donut steel self insert"??? and second of all yes, the sole reason i liked reading this is because i thought this was going it be a nice manga about a washed up sensei and busty cute monster girls! i was kinda looking forword for some the cliches we may see! but then the author decided to go with this stupid,retarded,unnecessary forced drama bs happened and i just skipping until it's finally fucking done and gone
"oc donut steel self insert"
Original Character, do not steal.

This forced drama has been one of the dumbest I've seen, and I've read a lot of manga. Yeah, I'm pretty sure everyone was expecting a nice lighthearted harem series with personal redemption for Washio.

Instead, what we get:
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Damn, starting to love this arc now. More for the "Colorful" comments that come forward with each chapter the writer tries to beat this dead horse arc into the pavement with a bat! Just to let EVERYONE know, that means everyone commenting and about to comment! This is me being on YOUR side cause I agree with you all! The writer is testing everyone's patience all for a pay-off I can't see working out so well. Some of you guys seem ready to take a trip to Japan to have "words" with the Writer and Editor for why this is being so SEVERLY drawn out! Wish I had a time machine so I could see for myself the ending, but looking at it, it's not looking good! Thankfully I'm not reading past 30 till this fucking arc ends. Just came to comment, didn't even READ the chapter yet or the last one! This is something that needs binge reading! I fucking HATE cliffhangers on slowly updating shit!
 
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I am shocked that there's this many comments, and everyone is so focused on the edgy villain and the bad writing that nobody has said anything about the 2-page spread for the ground-level shot of Drako's ass

Like bro you can even see the thong string wrap around the tail up over the hips, absolute fuckin tonal whiplash for nothing
 
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I am shocked that there's this many comments, and everyone is so focused on the edgy villain and the bad writing that nobody has said anything about the 2-page spread for the ground-level shot of Drako's ass

Like bro you can even see the thong string wrap around the tail up over the hips, absolute fuckin tonal whiplash for nothing
Story is so shit the fan service is ignored
 
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⚠️This post was made using MTL, so keep that in mind while reading. The purpose is to provide the MangaDex community with some insight into Japanese audience opinions—not to fish for internet points. So, please refrain from giving a 'like' or any other reaction. ⚠️

Here are some comments from the Japanese public on the GANMA! (ガンマ) app:

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解放する
解放する
解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する解放する

構わん
行け

あの子を解放しろ
あの子を解き放て
あの子はヒロインだぞ

Release
Release
Release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release release

I don't mind.
Go!

Free that girl.
Set her loose.
She’s the heroine, damn it!

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ロリウスがただのロリコンじゃなくて絶望が大好きとかいう変態要素まで追加されて嫌悪感増し増しなんだが、、
ロリウスに何されたのかもドラ子が何を知ってんのかも分からず結局ワシオ先生のとこに戻るのか……
次からは胸糞から開放されると信じてるよ

Julius isn’t just a lolicon, now they’ve added this twisted pervert trait of him loving despair, and it’s made him even more revolting. I still don’t know what he did to Draco or what Draco knows, and in the end, we’re just going back to Washio-sensei... I’m holding out hope that next time we’ll finally be free from this disgusting experience.

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たーじゃ
いや、どんなサムネやねん

かやりんちょす
お尻拡大ね笑

たーじゃ
Seriously, what’s up with that thumbnail?

かやりんちょす
Butt enlargement, lol
The thumbnail:
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シーウェイ
ここ数回の展開は正直つまらん... 読んでてしんどい...
はよ普通の学園ラブコメに戻してくれぇええ………

長葱戦士
展開変わったからもう少し待てば戻るかも?

シーウェイ
The last few chapters have honestly been boring... It's exhausting to read...
Please just hurry up and bring it back to a normal school romcom alreadyyy...

長葱戦士
Since the plot's changed, maybe if we wait a bit longer, it'll go back to normal?

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購読者からのフィードバックのためか、展開が
急に早める感じもありますね。
洗脳精神操作催眠のような種類は好みが極端に分かれる種類なので両刃の剣のような素材なので苦手な方が多くてちょっと心配でした
もう反発する購読者も減るでしょう..
何かドラコが鷲尾先生のために版を組んだような気もするし、一人で犠牲になるような気もするし、これからモンスター娘たちが鷲尾先生のメンタルを回復させて ユリウス先生を少し地獄にでも行かせたらと思います。
作家さん、健康管理に気をつけて頑張ってください!^

在私が受けている感じを話してみると
モンスター娘たちの魅力がユリウスの登場で消える感じが一番大きく感じられる部分
クラウディアの場合、洗脳を恣意的に解けず.. ユリウスが解放してくれたが..
まだ洗脳が完全に解けたわけでもない状態のようだが.. いつまた洗脳されるかわからない状態で何の対策もなしに先生のところに行

It seems like the pace of the plot is suddenly speeding up, probably due to feedback from the readers.
Stories involving brainwashing, mind control, and hypnosis tend to have very polarized opinions, so it’s a double-edged sword, and I was a bit worried because many people dislike that kind of material.
There will probably be fewer readers rebelling against it now...
I also feel like Draco might have arranged things for Washio-sensei, and she might end up sacrificing herself. I think it would be interesting if the monster girls helped Washio-sensei recover mentally and sent Julius-sensei to some kind of hell.
Author, please take care of your health and keep up the good work! ^

If I talk about how I’m feeling right now, the biggest issue seems to be that the charm of the monster girls is fading with Julius’s appearance.
In Claudia’s case, she couldn’t break free from the brainwashing on her own... Julius freed her, but...
It doesn’t seem like the brainwashing has been completely undone yet... she’s still in a state where we don’t know when she might be brainwashed again, and there’s no plan in place as she heads to the teacher’s place.

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れ、2週に1回の更新だからみんな疲れ始めてるんよな
他の作品でもこういう鬱展開自体はあるあるだけど、週1みたいなテンポじゃないと感情移入してる読者は疲れてくるんよね。

俺はこれが初めての週2での投稿の作品見たけど想像よりも待ちの時間が長くて早く更新してくれって思っちゃう。

だから耐えられない人が出てくるのも当たり前ではある気がするんよね。

でも、1話書くのに相当時間がかかるのも理解出来るから難しい所よなとは思う。
とりあえず作者さんは自分の体と相談しながら執筆は続けて欲しいよね

Since the updates are every two weeks, everyone is starting to get tired of it. Even though dark, depressing storylines like this are pretty common in other works, if the pacing isn’t weekly, readers who are emotionally invested start to get fatigued.

This is my first time seeing a work with updates every two weeks, and the waiting time feels longer than I imagined. I just want the updates to come faster.

So, it’s only natural that some people won’t be able to keep up with it.

But I also understand that it takes a lot of time to write each chapter, so it’s a difficult situation.
Anyway, I hope the author continues writing while taking care of their health.

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君既射爆済
鬱展開が遅い長いって文句垂れて疵残してた連中は展開が進んだ事喜びやがれよ。
正直先生には好き放題書いてもらいたいし読者に媚び売って欲しくないので、先生自身が望んだ展開である事を祈ってるますわよ。

C4-621
おひとり様で喜んでてもろて。
我ら我慢できなくてパンパンアーミーが作者に自我を擦り付けるのを辞めろみたいなこと言ってるが、てめぇの意見を俺らアーミーに擦ってるのと何が違 うん?
散々引きずり回した鬱展開を「まるで何もなかった」かのように180° クイックターンされたらビビるだろ。ヘンゼルとグレーテルのパン屑みたいに毎話で希望が散りばめられてれば俺らだって全裸待機しとるわ。


桜 衣乃
不平不満というだけでは、どんな漫画でも成功することはできません。ストーリーテリングにおいて不十分な部分や改善点は外部の目でよりよく見える部分なので、その部分で編集者の方々も読者の文章を通じてフィードバックを受けて変更点を改善するのです不平不満だけで考えているという作家がいるなら、その作家の力量はそこまででしょう


君既射爆済
The ones who complained that the depressing developments were too slow and dragged on, leaving scars behind — they should be happy now that the plot is moving forward.
Honestly, I want the author to write whatever they like, and I don’t want them to pander to the readers. So, I’m just hoping this is the direction the author themselves wanted.

C4-621
If you're happy being alone, go ahead and enjoy it.
We, on the other hand, can't take it anymore, and you're saying we should stop forcing our will onto the author, but what's the difference between that and you forcing your opinion onto us?
After being dragged through all those exhausting, depressing developments, if things suddenly make a 180° turn like 'nothing ever happened,' of course, we'd freak the hell out. If every episode scattered little crumbs of hope like Hansel and Gretel’s breadcrumb trail, then sure, we'd all be waiting around butt-naked in anticipation.


桜 衣乃
Simply complaining and expressing dissatisfaction alone won't make any manga successful. In storytelling, the parts that are lacking or need improvement are often more visible to outside eyes, and through feedback from readers’ comments, editors are able to make adjustments and improvements. If an author is only focused on complaining and dissatisfaction, then their ability as a writer is likely limited.
I'm not too sure about this one. Especially the one made by C4-621. It didn’t really make much sense.

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まあ
なんというか
♥の数
なんというか
推移が
なんというか
顕著だなあと

Well...
how should I put it...
the number of ♥s...
you know...
the trend is...
I mean...
really noticeable.
I believe he's referring to the decline in the number of hearts (likes).

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2週間に一回更新でこの展開だと読むのすごい疲れる
ドラ子だっけあの子の後々実は先生が好きでしたとか言ってもいらん
あのキモい催眠使う先生と消えてほしいわ
マジでいらん


ってかそもそもハーレム展開! とか言ってもワシオ先生もパッとしない心境で周りに流されたままの展開なのにそこでNTRみたいな鬱展開入れられてもただただ不愉快でしかない

Updating once every two weeks with this kind of plot development makes it exhausting to follow.
Was her name Draco or something? Even if she later says she actually liked the teacher or something, I really don’t care.
I just want that creepy teacher who uses hypnosis to disappear.
Seriously, I don’t need any of this.

I mean, even if they say it’s a harem development! Washio-sensei is just in a dull state of mind, going along with everything around her. So when they throw in an NTR-like depressing development, it’s just plain unpleasant.

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ドラ子関わってくんじゃねぇよ。今更ヘイト集めすぎたからって慌てて分かりやすく事情がありましたってか??? どっちにしてもワシオにとって足引っ張ってしかいないのは変わんねぇしウゼェから出てくんなよゴミみたいな展開しか産んでねぇんだから

Don’t get involved, Draco. Are you seriously trying to backpedal now, just because you've gathered too much hate, and suddenly make it clear that there was a reason for everything??? Either way, Draco's just been nothing but a burden to Washio, and it hasn’t changed. She’s annoying, so stay out of it. All she’s done is create garbage-like developments.

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ドラ子オオオオ!!
信じてたぞおおお!!

DracoOOOOO!!
I believed in youuuuu!!

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正直まだまだヒロイン達との絡みが足りてない状況で寝取り展開みたいな状況になったから
反発が凄かったと思う作者のやりたいようにすれば良いとも思うが、シリアス展開を入れたいならもっと深掘りしてから入れれば感想は違ったと思う
コメントを汲み取って巻き始めてるのはいいこと
もっと冴えないおじさんが若い子に翻弄される展開が見たい

Honestly, there hasn’t been enough interaction with the heroines yet, and then suddenly there’s a NTR-like development, so I think the backlash was pretty intense.
I do think the author should do what they want, but if they wanted to add a serious development, they should have dug deeper into it first, and maybe the reactions would have been different.
It’s good that they’re picking up on the comments and starting to change things.
I want to see more development where an unremarkable older guy is being messed around by younger girls.

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流石にそろそろ勘弁してくれって思ってたから
次回からワシオ先生が紙面に戻ってくる様で嬉しい

Honestly, I was starting to think 'enough already,'
so I'm glad to hear that Washio-sensei will be coming back to the pages starting next time.

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解放する!!!!!!!

Releaseeeee!!!!!!!

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とりま履いてて安心した。ドラコも操られてると思ったけど自我あるんか、自分なりにユリウスを監視してるんかな。

For now, I'm relieved she's wearing it. I thought Draco was being controlled, but does she have her own will? Maybe she's keeping an eye on Julius in her own way.

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サムネならぬサケツ(^w^)

Not a thumbnail, but a thighnail (^w^)

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C4-621
新手のスタンド攻撃か!?ってくらいの急展開。
正直なぁ、てめぇは今更味方ヅラすんなやと言いたい笑 もうちょっとこのくっそ長い展開の端々にドラ娘NTR描写よりも、今回みたいに「こいつ、、まさか?」みたいなのが散りばめられてれば納得の展開だった。
今までの諸々のフラストレーションでどんな展開でも文句つけちゃいそうになる。
例えば急展開に次ぐ急にお色気? ラブコメを最後
に挟んだり、お茶を濁してるようにも見えちゃう。

sliver
今までの〜ならもう読まない方がいいと思うよ
いや、マジで、文句とか批判じゃなくて

C4-621
This is such a sudden twist, it’s like a new kind of Stand attack or something.
Honestly, I just wanna say—don’t go acting like you're on our side now, not after all this time lol. Instead of dragging out this stupidly long arc with random Draco NTR scenes, they should’ve sprinkled in more moments like this one, where you're like 'Wait... could it be...?' throughout this long-ass arc, the development would’ve felt a lot more convincing.
With all the built-up frustration so far, it feels like people are gonna complain no matter what happens.
For example, after one sudden twist after another—now suddenly fanservice?
Then they slip in a romcom at the end?
It kind of looks like they’re just trying to cover things up.

sliver
If you’re still stuck on how things used to be, then I honestly think it’s better if you just stop reading.
No, seriously—not trying to complain or criticize or anything.


These comments were a real pain to MTL. Also, I don’t have any spoilers for Chapter 36 since it hasn’t been released yet.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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