Ansatsu Skill de Isekai Saikyou ~Renkinjutsu to Ansatsujutsu o Kiwameta Ore wa, Sekai o Kage kara Shihai suru~ - Vol. 4 Ch. 13

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..... this story has no hope... guys that are meant to be fodder and dragging sh*t out....

And even though there is a sexy princess, MC ain't doing sh*t with her...

Readers don't read stories about OP guys having a tough time with fodder....

Why do these authors try to write OP MC's if they are ashamed of the MC being too OP.
 
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Art is wasted on this story. Had the story been better and the MC not just be a generic emotionless Gary Stu that can do everything this coulda been great. He coulda been making some legendary hentai instead
No, it doesn't matter if he's a Gary Stu.... but if he is one, then make us enjoy him... don't have him struggle against fodder...

It's supposed to be the difference between a performance and a contest. Normal MCs deal with contests... one where they might win or lose and we enjoy the process.

An OP MC is meant to be a performance... we don't enjoy the struggle or the will they won't they.... we want to just enjoy the dance and music...

Normal MC = Tennis Match or Basketball Game
OP MC = Dance Performance or Concert

But many authors try to do a bad mix of the 2...
 
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He just summoned a Blackbird dang.

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And now I know the reason why big booba girls can take items from their cleavage. It's because they have an item box in it. :finnawoke:
 
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NGL While I do agree that art carries this series I kind of dissagree that the it has no story, the premise trying to convert people and god being in play from day 1 is a pretty good baseline.

What come after is really what screw this series up, the art while great is basically dragging down the series with how much time is needed and this series basically doesn't do much after how many year has it been since released?

Also storywise killing evil god follower with assasination technique while trying to conver people was a good premise, but the author fuck up when satark is already county level and Layt have a goddamn nuke. I mean after this it's going to either universe level which would be jarring or go down hill.
 

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